She definitely needs a better editor. Despite the language differences, there were still numerous grammatical errors. As stated above, a Thesaurus would also be wise, as one can only read, hear, and/or see the same word repeated over and over again. I recall rolling my eyes several times, while reading alone, while stumbling across them! Don’t get me wrong. I liked the series, but wouldn’t purchase them from another character’s standpoint. Don’t fix something if it’s not broke. Her name is big enough now that she can focus on a new trilogy and people will automatically purchase it based on the way her mind works.